It’s a problem that I have been overcoming. With some of my work, a problem when I’m writing is saying so much that some paragraphs become cluttered or not saying enough when a thought should be expanded so as to provide the meaning. But I had to be more thoughtful about these difficulties. I somehow conquered this by getting everything in my head down on paper. And with a certain amount of editing, say it in such a way, that it’s clear. Being more thoughtful in other words.
Difficulties in writing can pass, but one must be aware of them first, for without awareness, then there is no rectifying.
So, I tried to sort it out with those pieces that on second reading sounded a little underdone or overdone.
Pete's Eclectic Flying Machine 